Rex Sun

Y'all know me, I like it when folks whip me into shape. Ow! Feel free, f-list, to ignore this post entirely. I am inviting a certain reviewer to speak with me. I hope this person comes, really, and I also hope this person is not scared off by the tl;dr. But if any of y'all would like to register your two cents, please, feel free to jump right in. (:

I received this review on FFnet for Decayed:


( What follows is the review, and an extremely long point by point response, in which I speak directly to the reviewer. Read if you've got time on your hands, I suppose. )

Title: Decayed
Rating: R
Fandom: Code Geass
Character(s): Lelouch-centric. Mild Lelouch+Suzaku.
Summary: (Kinkmeme request.) Suzaku dies in Shinjuku, and Lelouch sets off on a different path: one that is destined to decay with time.

Notes: This has already been posted on the meme, I've just been lazy about copying it here. Part ten. And yes, I am still working on both Decayed and Nothing in Yourself... or, well, I still intend to, at least. To be honest I've barely touched them for a long time.

 

( The air smells like death, the death of nature and men alike. )

 

Title: Decayed
Rating: PG-13
Fandom:  Code Geass
Character(s):  Lelouch-centric. Mild Lelouch+Suzaku.
Summary:  (Kinkmeme request.) Suzaku dies in Shinjuku, and Lelouch sets off on a different path: one that is destined to decay with time.

Status:  Part eight, ongoing, incomplete. Unedited


( Who knew destroying the world was child's play? )

Title: Decayed
Rating: PG-13
Fandom:  Code Geass
Character(s):  Lelouch-centric. Euphemia, Kallen. Mild Lelouch+Suzaku.
Summary:  (Kinkmeme request.) Suzaku dies in Shinjuku, and Lelouch sets off on a different path: one that is destined to decay with time.

Status:  Part six, ongoing, incomplete. Unedited.


( Maybe he longs for comfort because Kallen is aiming her gun at him. )

Title: Decayed
Rating: PG-13
Fandom:  Code Geass
Character(s):  Lelouch-centric. Kallen, C.C., Cornelia, Euphemia.
Summary:  (Kinkmeme request.) Suzaku dies in Shinjuku, and Lelouch sets off on a different path: one that is destined to decay with time.

Status:  Part four, ongoing, incomplete. Unedited.


( Checkmate. Euphy wins. )

Title:  Decayed
Rating:  PG-13  (death and disturbing images)
Fandom:  Code Geass
Character(s):  Lelouch-centric. Suzaku, Kaguya.
Summary:  (Kinkmeme request.) Suzaku dies in Shinjuku, and Lelouch sets off on a different path: one that is destined to decay with time.

Status: Part two, ongoing, incomplete. Unedited.


( Before I met you, I was dead. )