While you're editing, typo here: "And they were going to take Lelouch awake, and Lelouch only—but Lelouch refused"
It actually made me pause because... was Lelouch sleeping up to that point? But he seemed so tense. :p Reading comprehension and logical reasoning after 10pm goes drastically down for me.
I'm SO HAPPY about this being on FFNET for purely altruistic reasons and not 'cause I'm lazy and that's the easiest place for me to reread things. That would be selfish. And I am a selfless creature - just like Lelouch.
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Re: tl;dr - Awesome fic is awesome
Date: 2011-09-28 03:39 am (UTC)It actually made me pause because... was Lelouch sleeping up to that point? But he seemed so tense. :p Reading comprehension and logical reasoning after 10pm goes drastically down for me.
I'm SO HAPPY about this being on FFNET for purely altruistic reasons and not 'cause I'm lazy and that's the easiest place for me to reread things. That would be selfish. And I am a selfless creature - just like Lelouch.
...why are you laughing at me?