Ba ha ha ha, oh I feel terrible. I shan't say nothing except that the tears will so righteously flow in the future!
Since you mentioned the title specifically... Would you mind telling me what you think of the (attempted) humor here? Of course the overall theme is death and it is meant to abruptly overpower the humor, but is the humor even detectable? (I have had some success with humor-writing in the past, but it isn't my usual thing, so I am a little self-conscious.)
The title serves a dual purpose. On the serious side of things it rings true, but on the supposed humor side it is meant to be contrasted with Edward.
Sorry, is this too much to ask? We've only just met after all~ :P
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Date: 2012-01-18 04:23 am (UTC)Since you mentioned the title specifically... Would you mind telling me what you think of the (attempted) humor here? Of course the overall theme is death and it is meant to abruptly overpower the humor, but is the humor even detectable? (I have had some success with humor-writing in the past, but it isn't my usual thing, so I am a little self-conscious.)
The title serves a dual purpose. On the serious side of things it rings true, but on the supposed humor side it is meant to be contrasted with Edward.
Sorry, is this too much to ask? We've only just met after all~ :P