You know, I'll comment on this twice because, right now, the flu is rendering me a little ... well, not as someone who's capable of writing the LONG, GUSHY comment you deserve (and yes, I have this complex over not being able to deliver proper reviews).
Anyhow, ♥ for your Tomoe characterisation: she's so loveable and ... I don't know, just likeable? I can see why Kotetsu fell for her. I somehow giggled at the fact that she didn't like shoes as much Kotetsu does (it's such a clever deconstruction of a popular trope!).
More ♥♥ for the little glimpses you offered into their relationship. I like that they weren't too fluffy, but sweet in a way that I think is realistic. I also liked the intimacy you showed between them (all those insights Tomoe has into Kotetsu's character <3).
What I found extremely clever was the recurring theme of time (and the recurring clock motif). The last parts of this fic were both sad, but … I also felt there was a sense of peace to it. I don’t know, it’s strange, but … I felt as if Tomoe had lived her life to the fullest?
Aaaand I am getting dizzy again, so time for me to end this comment, but I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks!
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Date: 2011-12-01 12:19 am (UTC)Anyhow, ♥ for your Tomoe characterisation: she's so loveable and ... I don't know, just likeable? I can see why Kotetsu fell for her. I somehow giggled at the fact that she didn't like shoes as much Kotetsu does (it's such a clever deconstruction of a popular trope!).
More ♥♥ for the little glimpses you offered into their relationship. I like that they weren't too fluffy, but sweet in a way that I think is realistic. I also liked the intimacy you showed between them (all those insights Tomoe has into Kotetsu's character <3).
What I found extremely clever was the recurring theme of time (and the recurring clock motif). The last parts of this fic were both sad, but … I also felt there was a sense of peace to it. I don’t know, it’s strange, but … I felt as if Tomoe had lived her life to the fullest?
Aaaand I am getting dizzy again, so time for me to end this comment, but I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks!