I'm sorry for commenting before Hedo-chan, but I love this fic, I really do.
Kotetsu’s jacket feels like a character in its own standing<3
The shoes with paisley and shoe heaven made me die from the overdose of cute and come back to life.
Kotetsu's accidential sexiness and coolness = so true!
Kotetsu and omoe exchanging naughty jokes = <333
Love without progress brought them no happiness.
This is very mature and fits the tones of their relationship.
His voice was both gentle and rough-- a tiger's pur gotta love this comparison <3
I love how you made Kotetsu's becoming a hero a result of a stroke of luck + Kotetsu’s compassin. It's just right.
I like how the prohression of their relationship is tied to with Kotetsu becoming a hero, but so much deeper at the same time. She's a fangirl, but of a positive kind.
It was with great effort that she tore herself away and dropped to one knee, never mind her blasted skirt riding up because he'd be seeing more of that very soon. He looked down at her blankly, probably because she had before then absolutely refused to administer anything even close to a blow job on her knees, so that couldn't be why she was down now. Then she pulled out the ring-- "My promise. Kotetsu, will you marry me?" --and he sort of threw a loud, pouty, childish, but ultimately goodnatured fit. Something about how he was the one that was supposed to do that and how he was going to be ridiculed forever and that she'd totally ruined his surprise. She had just given him a look. The look. I LOVE THIS PARAGRAPH, so hilarious and sexy<3
--wants to remember the time, that dare, remember, when they switched clothes for the day— <3 I can picture that XD
"You know what's important in marriage? That you think he's cool, and he thinks you're cool." Best relationship advice ever!
The last part is incredibly bittersweet and touching.
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Date: 2011-11-30 08:06 pm (UTC)Kotetsu’s jacket feels like a character in its own standing<3
The shoes with paisley and shoe heaven made me die from the overdose of cute and come back to life.
Kotetsu's accidential sexiness and coolness = so true!
Kotetsu and omoe exchanging naughty jokes = <333
Love without progress brought them no happiness.
This is very mature and fits the tones of their relationship.
His voice was both gentle and rough-- a tiger's pur gotta love this comparison <3
I love how you made Kotetsu's becoming a hero a result of a stroke of luck + Kotetsu’s compassin. It's just right.
I like how the prohression of their relationship is tied to with Kotetsu becoming a hero, but so much deeper at the same time. She's a fangirl, but of a positive kind.
It was with great effort that she tore herself away and dropped to one knee, never mind her blasted skirt riding up because he'd be seeing more of that very soon. He looked down at her blankly, probably because she had before then absolutely refused to administer anything even close to a blow job on her knees, so that couldn't be why she was down now. Then she pulled out the ring-- "My promise. Kotetsu, will you marry me?" --and he sort of threw a loud, pouty, childish, but ultimately goodnatured fit. Something about how he was the one that was supposed to do that and how he was going to be ridiculed forever and that she'd totally ruined his surprise.
She had just given him a look. The look.
I LOVE THIS PARAGRAPH, so hilarious and sexy<3
--wants to remember the time, that dare, remember, when they switched clothes for the day— <3 I can picture that XD
"You know what's important in marriage? That you think he's cool, and he thinks you're cool." Best relationship advice ever!
The last part is incredibly bittersweet and touching.
I’m very happy you wrote this pairing)))