You're so sweet, I love you comments! Thanks for supporting me so much <3
And I'm like SUCCESS because you're confirming that everything I tried to do-- Shirley's viewpoint coloring the actual events, the pov telling just enough, the mystery tantalizing without being unbearable-- everything I set out to do when chosing Shirley as the narrator, I have apparently accomplished. Booyah!
And yes, I will most definitely be posting this on FFNET. I uh, just have to edit the living shit out of it, you understand... :P
Re: tl;dr - Awesome fic is awesome
And I'm like SUCCESS because you're confirming that everything I tried to do-- Shirley's viewpoint coloring the actual events, the pov telling just enough, the mystery tantalizing without being unbearable-- everything I set out to do when chosing Shirley as the narrator, I have apparently accomplished. Booyah!
And yes, I will most definitely be posting this on FFNET. I uh, just have to edit the living shit out of it, you understand... :P