First off great FIC !!! I live how u described the flash back/ dream scene about there mother u made me feel as if u was there and watching the brothers go threw it I felt sooo helpless -sobs- I also loved how u took the weight of the book and made Ed start thinking about something that he had never pondered before. This FIC sorta reminds me how am starting a FIC of mine its not really the same but still the same thought people think he might die later on ect ect .. Any way back to the topic I loved ur FIC cant wait until the next chapter and find out what Ed will do an I can't wait to see the description of his lovely child cause she just has to be because she's Ed child lmao well thanks for he FIC can't wait for next one