Okay, so I was reading this on my phone today, and my friend came up and surprised me, and I totally screamed. ._. I think maybe it was the end line.

Anyway, I think you got Lelouch down pat right here. Very IC and evocative -- especially the added theatrics with Odysseus.

I think at the end he's seeking affirmation from Suzaku. He doesn't want to be seen as a broken boy. And I don't think Suzaku wants Lelouch to see himself as that either.

Thanks!