Kotetsu and Barnaby were so, dunno, almost sweet, worrying for each other. Team-y.
The criminal bristles, merely angered, not at all put on hold. “You primped up little Barbie, you really think you can beat me?” THIS LINE! Kallen would say that and think Karina a Barbie and Karina would be so pissed! I can't wait for the next catfight. It's gonna be hilarious.
I liked that Kotetsu noticed that Suzaku isn't a murderer. Kotetsu of all people would know!
You really made Agnes and Diethard a married couple, lol. He shows an unexpected alsmot caring side.
Because she knows him. She knows he can’t resist. He is right in the middle of this whole thing—storm chaser— This is very fitting)))
Whoa, I'm looking forward to some.
The only issue I have is that you could describe Kallen's suit some more. It took me a while to get she's wearing a helmet, yes? And armour? I think action scene is good.
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Kotetsu and Barnaby were so, dunno, almost sweet, worrying for each other. Team-y.
The criminal bristles, merely angered, not at all put on hold. “You primped up little Barbie, you really think you can beat me?” THIS LINE! Kallen would say that and think Karina a Barbie and Karina would be so pissed! I can't wait for the next catfight. It's gonna be hilarious.
I liked that Kotetsu noticed that Suzaku isn't a murderer. Kotetsu of all people would know!
You really made Agnes and Diethard a married couple, lol. He shows an unexpected alsmot caring side.
Because she knows him. She knows he can’t resist. He is right in the middle of this whole thing—storm chaser— This is very fitting)))
Whoa, I'm looking forward to some.
The only issue I have is that you could describe Kallen's suit some more. It took me a while to get she's wearing a helmet, yes? And armour? I think action scene is good.